Looks good Sam Looper, one opportunity: I would look at getting a hook that has a bigger gap in the front where the epoxy or whatever you are using is. The back part of the fly looks good. I could be wrong, but I am not; I have first hand experience about the gap. All I can say is: $1 bills, a night moon, no PBR, and numerous line siders not being penetrated.
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